tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-337445903647040695.post2569090085993147128..comments2015-06-18T15:30:00.896-07:00Comments on Wild & Lawless Writers: In Jack's Bed by C.J. SneereAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03985580297553072171noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-337445903647040695.post-82801696662313556832012-07-10T15:50:39.965-07:002012-07-10T15:50:39.965-07:00Sorry you were a bit disappointed in this one. I k...Sorry you were a bit disappointed in this one. I kind of wondered if I cut that scene a bit too short. I felt like I did. But thank you for your kind words on the other stories. I did have James confront his dad in the final bonus story to the series, where Jack and James get married, but I have a slight concern I rushed that a bit, too. If you do check it out, I hope you enjoy it. :)<br /><br />I think you reviewed Jack & James on Smashwords, maybe? I seem to recognize your name. If so, that's greatly appreciated! I love to hear thoughts from men and women. <br /><br />Much thanks for dropping by!<br /><br />C.J.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03985580297553072171noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-337445903647040695.post-11045152815393076662012-07-04T22:09:17.506-07:002012-07-04T22:09:17.506-07:00I so much enjoyed the two first Jack stories. I w...I so much enjoyed the two first Jack stories. I was a bit disappointed with this one, it reads like a filler that has been tossed quickly off to link up to the next instalments in the Jack n' James story. <br />I expected a lot more of the encounter with James's Dad. I think because it's Jack who confronts him, we as readers are left dissatisfied. We need James to find a way of facing up to his past and move on before we can move on with him past the abuse. (I had this problem in one of the novels I was writing, where I realised it wasn't coming out right because everyone except the character most involved was confronting the abusive character.) <br />I would put a review up on Smashwords, especially of Jack the Lad, which I enjoyed as I did Jack & James, but I am not sure it would do your reputation any good to have a girl reviewing your sexy stuff! <br />(Naoko Smith)Anthropological Mumhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17431472288684196048noreply@blogger.com